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 Task 1. Insert the words below into the text. a.       abuseb.       bill forc.        cravings ford.       demeanse.      …..
kisdobos 2009.06.29 17:48:19
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December 1, 2005
Hooked on the Web: Help Is on the Way
By SARAH KERSHAW

REDMOND, Wash.

THE waiting room for Hilarie Cash's practice has the look and feel of many a therapist's office, with soothing classical music, paintings of gentle swans and colorful flowers and on the bookshelves stacks of brochures on how to get help.

But along with her patients, Dr. Cash, who runs Internet/Computer Addiction Services here in the city that is home to Microsoft, is a pioneer in a growing niche in mental health care and addiction recovery.

The patients, including Mike, 34, are what Dr. Cash and other mental health professionals call onlineaholics. They even have a diagnosis: Internet Addiction Disorder.

These specialists estimate that 6 percent to 10 percent of the approximately 189 million Internet users in this country have a dependency that can be as destructive as alcoholism and drug addiction, and they are rushing to treat it. Yet some in the field remain skeptical that heavy use of the Internet qualifies as a legitimate addiction, and one academic expert called it a fad illness.

Skeptics argue that even obsessive Internet use does not exact the same toll on health or family life as conventionally recognized addictions. But, mental health professionals who support the diagnosis of Internet addiction say, a majority of obsessive users are online to further addictions to gambling or pornography or have become much more dependent on those vices because of their prevalence on the Internet.

But other users have a broader dependency and spend hours online each day, surfing the Web, trading stocks, instant messaging or blogging, and a fast-rising number are becoming addicted to Internet video games.

Dr. Cash and other professionals say that people who abuse the Internet are typically struggling with other problems, like depression and anxiety. But, they say, the Internet's omnipresent offer of escape from reality, affordability, accessibility and opportunity for anonymity can also lure otherwise healthy people into an addiction.

Dr. Cash's patient Mike, who was granted anonymity to protect his privacy, was at high risk for an Internet addiction, having battled alcohol and drug abuse and depression. On a list of 15 symptoms of Internet addiction used for diagnosis by Internet/Computer Addiction Services, Mike, who is unemployed and living with his mother, checked off 13, including intense cravings for the computer, lying about how much time he spends online, withdrawing from hobbies and social interactions, back pain and weight gain.

Because the condition is not recognized in psychiatry as a disorder, insurance companies do not reimburse for treatment. So patients either pay out of pocket, or therapists and treatment centers bill for other afflictions, including the nonspecific impulse control disorder.

There is at least one inpatient program, at Proctor Hospital in Peoria, Ill., which admits patients to recover from obsessive computer use. Experts there said they see similar signs of withdrawal in those patients as in alcoholics or drug addicts, including profuse sweating, severe anxiety and paranoid symptoms.

Still, there is little hard science available on Internet addiction.

"I think using the Internet in certain ways can be quite absorbing, but I don't know that it's any different from an addiction to playing the violin and bowling," said Sara Kiesler, professor of computer science and human-computer interaction at Carnegie Mellon University. "There is absolutely no evidence that spending time online, exchanging e-mail with family and friends, is the least bit harmful. We know that people who are depressed or anxious are likely to go online for escape and that doing so helps them."

She said calling it an addiction "demeans really serious illnesses, which are things like addiction to gambling, where you steal your family's money to pay for your gambling debts, drug addictions, cigarette addictions." She added, "These are physiological addictions."

But Dr. Cash, who began treating Internet addicts 10 years ago, said that Internet addiction was a potentially serious illness. She said she had treated suicidal patients who had lost jobs and whose marriages had been destroyed because of their addictions.

Several counselors and other experts said time spent on the computer was not important in diagnosing an addiction to the Internet. The question, they say, is whether Internet use is causing serious problems, including the loss of a job, marital difficulties, depression, isolation and anxiety, and still the user cannot stop.

"The line is drawn with Internet addiction," said Mr. Zehr of Proctor Hospital, "when I'm no longer controlling my Internet use. It's controlling me."

A crucial difference between treating alcoholics and drug addicts, is that total abstinence is usually recommended for recovery from substance abuse, whereas moderate and manageable use is the goal for behavioral addictions.

www.nytimes.com/2005/12/01/fashion/thursdaystyles/01addict.html?pagewanted=print
 Task 1. Insert the words below into the text. a.       accomplishedb.       covered upc.        culledd.       drug dayse.      …..
kisdobos 2009.06.29 17:47:24
SOLUTIONS

Task 1. Insert the words below into the text.

a. writer’s-blocked
b. overdosed on
c. covered up
d. ramped up
e. hospitalized himself
f. recovering addict
g. stayed sober
h. relapses into
i. predecessors
j. revelations
k. excesses
l. relieved of
m. functioning addict
n. drug days
o. I was on drugs
p. showed up
q. two months out of rehab
r. culled
s. accomplished

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May 24, 2009
Get Clean, Come Back: Eminem’s Return
By JON PARELES

IN late December 2007 a depressed, writer’s-blocked, pill-popping, opiate-addicted Marshall Mathers, better known as the multimilllion-selling rapper Eminem, overdosed on some new blue pills someone gave him — they were methadone — and collapsed on his bathroom floor. Public statements covered up the reason for his emergency hospitalization and detox, claiming the problem was pneumonia. A month later Mr. Mathers had ramped up his habit again.

But the overdose scared him. Early last year he hospitalized himself, went through rehab and started the full 12-step program of a recovering addict, complete with meetings, a sponsor and a therapist. Mr. Mathers, 36, says he has stayed sober since April 20, 2008.

Far from concealing his addiction battle, he’s making it the center of his comeback. The cover of “Relapse” (Shady/Aftermath/Interscope), the first new Eminem album since 2004, builds his face out of pills, and in some songs he raps, as directly as a rhymer can, about how drugs nearly destroyed him. Elsewhere on the album Eminem resumes — or relapses into — his main alter ego, Slim Shady: the sneering, clownish, paranoid, homophobic, celebrity-stalking compulsive rapist and serial killer.

Eminem’s four previous major-label albums of new material — “The Slim Shady LP” in 1999, “The Marshall Mathers LP” in 2000, “The Eminem Show” in 2002 and “Encore” in 2004 — have sold about 30 million copies in the United States, according to Nielsen SoundScan. “Relapse” clings to the formula of its predecessors: it’s partly truth and partly fiction, with personal revelations and sociopathic farce side by side.

“I don’t know if I’m exposing myself,” Mr. Mathers said by telephone from his studio in Detroit. “I’m kind of just coming clean and exhaling.”

He speaks amiably and coherently, without defensiveness, chatting with the zeal of a recovering addict about both his old excesses and his new clarity and productivity, sounding like someone relieved of a burden. “I was the worst kind of addict, a functioning addict,” he said. “I was so deep into my addiction at one point that I couldn’t picture myself being able to do anything without some kind of drug.”

He has been watching videos of himself onstage and in interviews from his drug days, including one from Black Entertainment Television that he said he has no memory of doing, when Ambien made him so befuddled he couldn’t even respond to simple questions. “I want to see what I looked like when I was on drugs, so I never go back to it,” he said.

In the five years between his own albums, he worked as a producer, making beats for other rappers, and occasionally showed up as a guest rapper; he now calls his verse on “Touch Down,” with the Atlanta rapper T.I., “horrible.”

But last year, just two months out of rehab, Eminem met Dr. Dre met in Orlando, Fla., to try recording. Eminem had been doing what he called “mind exercises” to get himself writing. “I’d stack a bunch of words and just go down the line and try to fill in the blanks and make sense out of them,” he said. “For three or four years I couldn’t do it any more.”

When he was sober, he said, “the wheels started turning again.” Working in Orlando and then in Detroit, Eminem and Dr. Dre recorded hundreds of tracks and finished enough new songs for three albums. They have culled them to two; Eminem plans to release “Relapse 2” before the end of this year. “The deeper I got into my addiction, the tighter the lid got on my creativity,” he said. “When I got sober the lid just came off. In seven months I accomplished more than I could accomplish in three or four years doing drugs.”

www.nytimes.com/2009/05/24/arts/music/24pare.html?_r=1&pagewanted=print

 Task 1. Next you’ll find sentences taken out from the thesis part of introductions. Insert the phrases below into the gaps. (See solutions in Comments.)a)      Any of these arguments alone can justifyb)      does enormous harm…..
kisdobos 2009.06.29 16:50:32
SOLUTIONS TO TASK 1

a) A vegan diet is, without a doubt, the best choice of eating: it is the best choice for our health, and the only choice that fosters the defending of human rights.
b) Although the death penalty is well-supported by the U.S. public, there are a number of powerful considerations why these supporters are wrong, including the fact that …
c) Any of these arguments alone can justify that capital punishment should be abolished.
d) Current gun control laws are vastly outdated in the 21st century. The new realities require that we strictly control guns, since a tighter policy on safety features of guns would save a great many children’s lives.
e) It is crucial to pass this bill this time, since advertising and promotion of tobacco products imposes enormous costs on our health service and does enormous harm to the health of our nation.
f) People should listen more to the scientific, moral, social, legal and human rights arguments of gay-rights activists, which justify that gay couples should have the right to be legally married.
g) Society needs more than ever to recognize that marijuana use is a serious threat - it harms the brain, causes depression and results in amotivational syndrome – and therefore it is crucial to keep our strict laws criminalizing marijuana abuse.
h) There are times when the prolongation of your own life is absurd and unethical, and that the individual, sovereign over his own body, ought to be allowed to make the determination for himself. In such cases it should be legal for a physician to provide terminally ill patients with such help.


SOLUTIONS TO TASK 2

RICH COUNTRIES SHOULD HELP POORER ONES
Although world trade is continuously expanding and globalization is supposed to lend a helpful hand to the developing world., billions of people still live in poverty, and in many places, the gap between rich and poor is widening. The responsibility of the developed nations in alleviating the suffering of the developing world has been hotly debated recently. This essay will argue helping poor countries is a moral and economic imperative for the rich countries.

THE CHILDREN OF ILLEGAL IMMIGRANTS SHOULD BE EDUCATED
Immigration laws have been the subject of debate throughout American history, especially in states such as California and Texas, where immigrant populations are high. Recently, some citizens have been questioning whether we should continue to educate the children of illegal immigrants. While this issue is steeped in emotional controversy, we must think rationally about the options. Although some might say that educating undocumented immigrants costs us a lot, but in reality, not educating them would cost us much more. This argument alone can justify that children of immigrants should be educated.

DANGEROUS SPORTS SHOULD NOT BE BANNED
Dangerous sports have always divided people. Millions of people play sport every day, and, inevitably, some suffer injury or pain. Most players and spectators accept this risk. However, some people would like to see dangerous sports such as boxing banned. This essay will examine the most important arguments that justify that dangerous sports should not be banned.


SOLUTIONS TO TASK 3

I.
SHOULD WE BEAT CHILDREN? NO!

Many parents use physical punishment as a way of dealing with discipline problems in their children. Very few parents would agree with using this kind of force regularly. However, many parents still believe that they have a right to use some physical punishment to deal with certain misbehaviors at certain ages. However, this essay will ask if some physical punishment is acceptable today. A number of arguments can be cited.

Problems:

1. Title: I know that I will be reading something about why we shouldn’t beat our children. But the wording sounds very colloquial.

2. Start: You claim that many parents beat their children. And right after that you claim the opposite, that very few parents beat their children. What’s more, the next sentence talks about many childbeaters again. Now what should I believe at this point?

3. Thesis: Don’t just ask. Tell me what your opinion is. And don’t leave sentences half-finished.

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Model introduction:

PARENTS SHOULD NOT BEAT THEIR CHILDREN TO DISCIPLINE
It stirs up controversy from time to time whether it is acceptable for parents to use physical punishment as a way of dealing with discipline problems in their children. Very few parents would agree with using this kind of force regularly. However, some parents still believe that they have a right to use some physical punishment to deal with certain misbehaviors at certain ages. A number of reasons can be cited to justify why parents should not use physical punishment to discipline their children.

Explanation:

1. Title: Clear, controversial and concise thesis
PARENTS SHOULD NOT BEAT THEIR CHILDREN TO DISCIPLINE

2. Start by pointing to the controversial nature of the issue.
It stirs up controversy from time to time whether it is acceptable for parents to use physical punishment as a way of dealing with discipline problems in their children.

3. State that you have opponents. State what your opponents assert.
Very few parents would agree with using this kind of force regularly. However, some parents still believe that they have a right to use some physical punishment to deal with certain misbehaviors at certain ages.

4. State where you stand on this issue. It’s OK to state your thesis in a subordinate clause:
A number of reasons can be cited to justify why parents should not use physical punishment to discipline their children.

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II.
WHY WOMEN SHOULD NOT HAVE AN ABORTION

Women in the entire world have abortions. Yes, women believe they have many reasons to abort a child, such as fear of having or raising a child, rape, or not having enough money. But the situation is not interesting, there is never an acceptable reason to get an abortion. An important reason why women should not abort has to do with human values and religious values. And values of conscience.

Problems:

1. Title: Too colloquial sounding

2. Start: Do you think that making such a banal statement as “Women in the entire world have abortions,” which is evident to all of us, will help you look like an expert on this issue?

3. Thesis: It’s not bad to show briefly how the abortionists try to justify their stance, but don’t start with “Yes, this and that,” because it sounds colloquial. The way to make a consession is “Although,” “Admittedly,” or “It’s true that.” Besides, saying that the situation is not interesting sounds a bit too harsh. On the other hand, you have a clear and controversial thesis, which is the most important thing. It would be even better not to finish this paragraph with a fragment sentence.


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Model introduction:

WOMEN SHOULD NOT HAVE AN ABORTION

Abortion has always been a controversial issue, causing heated debates between the two sides. Supporters of abortion point to various reasons to abort, such as fear of raising a child, rape, or not having enough money. However, there can never be an acceptable reason to get an abortion. Some important reasons why women should not abort have to do with human values, religious values, and values of conscience.

Explanation:

1. Title: Put your thesis for title. This offers the advantage of reminding you that you need to have a clear thesis in an argumentative essay:
WOMEN SHOULD NOT HAVE AN ABORTION

2. It’s recommended starting with stating how this issue has been the subject of debate:
Abortion has always been a controversial issue, causing heated debates between the two sides.

3. Say that you have opponents, and perhaps mention how they try to justify their stance:
Supporters of abortion point to various reasons to abort, such as fear of raising a child, rape, or not having enough money.

4. State your own opinion, and if your intro is still not too long, cite some of the reasons that justify your opinion:
However, there can never be an acceptable reason to get an abortion. Some important reasons why women should not abort have to do with human values, religious values, and values of conscience.

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III.
WHY SHOULD YOU READ FOR PLEASURE?

Many people are changing their likes and the way that they enjoy their free time. These spend less time reading. Also, in the past years the use of the television and the internet has increased. The purpose of this essay is to present reasons why you should read just for pleasure. The reasons that I give you are quite simple: to improve your knowledge, to expand your general culture, to have more fun, to make your imagination fly, to find new ways to express your ideas, and finally to expand your vocabulary.

Problems:

1. Title: Are you asking ME?

2. Start: Good: you try to give some background. Bad: it’s not clear which is cause and which is effect.

3. Thesis: I understand that you want people to read more. But I don’t need to be convinced, because it seems such an evident fact to me. Perhaps if you gave me some indication that there is some controversy surrounding this issue, maybe I will be surprised enough to want to read your essay.

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Model introduction:

PEOPLE SHOULD READ MORE FOR PLEASURE

In the past years the use of the television and the internet has increased. Consequently, many people spend less time reading, stirring heated debates with people weighing in on both sides. This essay gives three reasons why people should read more for pleasure, pointing to questions of vocabulary learning, imagination and learning about different cultures.

Explanation:

1. Title: Your thesis which is clear, controversial and concise
PEOPLE SHOULD READ MORE FOR PLEASURE

2. Background that also points to the controversial nature of this issue:
In the past years the use of the television and the internet has increased. Consequently, many people spend less time reading, stirring heated debates with people weighing in on both sides.

3. Thesis with a summary of arguments:
This essay gives three reasons why people should read more for pleasure, pointing to questions of vocabulary learning, imagination and learning about different cultures.

By now you know how to write the body of an argumentative essay. In this section you will learn how to write a simple and quick introduction. On the one hand, introductions are very important. The introduction gives the reader his/her first impression of the text. The first impression that you…..
kisdobos 2009.06.29 16:49:43
CLASS
SOLUTIONS TO TASK 1.

1. Stating that the issue is controversial (and/or important/topical)
The issue of whether we should allow smoking in pubs and cafés has been widely debated in our community recently. It is an important issue because it concerns fundamental moral and health questions which may contribute to improved life conditions in this country.

2. Mentioning the opponents’ view
Although it is often argued that smokers deserve the right to enjoy their cigarettes in pubs and cafés,

3. Refuting opponent and giving your thesis
there are a number of powerful considerations why this traditional standpoint is mistaken. Any of these considerations alone can justify why smoking in these public spaces should be banned.


SOLUTIONS TO TASK 2.


1) controversial one
2) attracted
3) divisive issue
4) issues surrounding
5) stirred up a lot
6) few debates have been
7) public discourse
8) lie so deep
9) reconcile
10) instigated as strong emotions
11) has long been controversial


a) As a result, the issue is a very controversial one and has attracted a lot of debate.
b) For decades, the death penalty has been a controversial and divisive issue in American politics.
c) Issues surrounding genetic modification have stirred up a lot of controversy in recent years.
d) Few debates have been so much at the forefront of public discourse, and for so long a time.
e) Homosexuality is as old as history, and the differences of opinion in this dispute lie so deep that it seems almost impossible to reconcile the views of the two sides.
f) The debate over gun control has never instigated as strong emotions as it does today.
g) The use of pesticides has long been controversial.


POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS TO TASK 3.

I.
WHY PEOPLE SHOULD EXERCISE
In the past, I have never been inclined to participate in sports. Honestly, I didn’t like it, but many persons whom I lived with kept telling me everyday how good it was. Since the peer pressure was growing, I decided to go to the gym. It wasn’t until then that I could really understand people when they said exercise really helped a person get organized and keep them healthy physically and mentally.

Problems:

1. Title: Too colloquial sounding. We will use a condensed version of your thesis statement for title
2. Start: Nice story, but your professors want you to give a more general and more informative beginning to your essay, since argumentative essays try to give some background knowledge to the reader to put the issue in context.
3. Thesis: There is only an indirect statement of the thesis. We only learn about the benefits of exercise, and it remains guesswork what the writer wants to do in the essay: recount a personal story or convince us to do more exercise.

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Model introduction:

PEOPLE SHOULD EXERCISE REGULARLY TO KEEP HEALTHY
The question whether one should do exercise to keep healthy has been widely debated in our community recently. It’s an important issue because people have never avoided physical exercise to the extent as they do today. Those who are never inclined to participate in sports argue that going to the gym is a waste of time. However, these opponents are wrong for a number of reasons, including the fact that exercise helps a person get organized and keep them healthy physically and mentally. People should, therefore, exercise regularly to keep healthy.

Explanation:

1. Just like we saw in the model intro earlier, a usual ingredient in argumentative essays is mentioning that the issue was controversial (i.e. acknowledging that there were two sides to the issue):
The question whether one should do exercise to keep healthy has been widely debated in our community recently.

2. and gave a few more details that the reader needed to know:
It’s an important issue because people have never avoided physical exercise to the extent as they do today.

3. Then it stated the opponents’ view:
Those who are never inclined to participate in sports argue that going to the gym is a waste of time.

4. and finally, laid out the thesis:
However, these opponents are wrong for a number of reasons, including the fact that exercise helps a person get organized and keep them healthy physically and mentally. People should, therefore, exercise regularly to keep healthy.

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II.
I THINK ANIMAL TESTING SHOULD NOT BE BANNED
Each year about five million dogs, cats, rabbits, rats, chickens, pigeons, monkeys, donkeys, mosquitoes and other animals die during animal testing in the U.S. In my opinion, the subject of animal testing is very controversial for a number of reasons.

Problems:

1. Title: Don’t put “I think” in the title
2. Start: A bit too many examples, won’t you agree? Besides, no background to the issue. Why not mention how controversial this subject is?
3. Thesis: Oh, you do, but you act like it was a big discovery of yours. Just tell me it’s a controversial issue to get me interested in reading your essay, and finding out what your stance is on this issue. But the point of your essay is to give me some arguments to help me see which side is right. That way perhaps I can broaden my understanding of this issue, or even possibly change my mind.

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Model introduction:

ANIMAL TESTING SHOULD NOT BE BANNED
Animal testing has long been controversial, since each year about five million dogs, cats, monkeys, and other animals die during animal testing in the U.S. The opponents would like to see these tests banned altogether. However, the fierce criticism leveled at this practice loses sight of some very important benefits animal testing has, which far outweigh any possible drawbacks. Therefore, animal testing should not be banned in the US.

Explanation:

1. Title: Your thesis, if it’s not two lines long.
ANIMAL TESTING SHOULD NOT BE BANNED

2. State that this issue has been the subject of debate. You can also say why:
Animal testing has long been controversial, since each year about five million dogs, cats, monkeys, and other animals die during animal testing in the U.S.

3. Tell me what your opponents claim:
The opponents would like to see these tests banned altogether.

4. Tell me what you claim:
However, the fierce criticism leveled at this practice loses sight of some very important benefits animal testing has, which far outweigh any possible drawbacks. Therefore, animal testing should not be banned in the US.

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III.
DOES THE INDIVIDUAL HAVE A RIGHT TO PRIVACY?
Whereas before they appeared only in banks and at high-security areas, they are now entering public places such as malls, streets, stadiums and transport. Security cameras have become ubiquitous in many countries. Many people feel this affects their privacy. This essay will examine whether the advantages of these cameras outweigh their negative impact.

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Problems:
1. Title: Are saying or are you asking?
2. Start: What are you even talking about, “they appeared,” “they are now entering?” (Reading on), oh security cameras, you mean. The beginning is an informative piece of background info. But it would be a lot better if you made it clear in the first sentence what you’re talking about. It would also make sense to mention that the issue is controversial and divisive.
3. Thesis: You don’t have a thesis. Although I see that you’ve probably explored the subject, I don’t know what your opinion is. Before reading I’d like to know which side you belong to in this debate.


Model introduction:

SURVEILLANCE CAMERAS SHOULD BE RESTRICTED
The surveillance of citizens has stirred up a lot of controversy recently, because security cameras have become almost ubiquitous in developed countries. In fact, they are no longer restricted to banks and high-security areas, but now entering public places such as malls, streets, stadiums and transport. It has been argued by supporters that it is in our best interest to be watched. However, there are a number of powerful considerations why the advocates are wrong, and society needs to recognize that surveillance cameras have to be restricted so that citizens can keep enjoying their privacy.

Explanation of model introduction:

Title: Same as thesis, since the thesis is concise enough
SURVEILLANCE CAMERAS SHOULD BE RESTRICTED

Say that you are sticking your hand in a beehive, i.e. a controversy that divides people. Say what it is that divides people:
The surveillance of citizens has stirred up a lot of controversy recently, because security cameras have become almost ubiquitous in developed countries.

You can use “in fact” to give a little more detail about the subject of the debate, i.e. security cameras:
In fact, they are no longer restricted to banks and high-security areas, but now entering public places such as malls, streets, stadiums and transport.

What do opponents claim?
It has been argued by supporters that it is in our best interest to be watched.

Do you agree with them? What’s your opinion?
However, there are a number of powerful considerations why the advocates are wrong, and society needs to recognize that surveillance cameras have to be restricted so that citizens can keep enjoying their privacy.
Task 1. Many well-intended adults have tried to justify the use of school uniforms for many different reasons. Below are the three most popular arguments for having students wear uniforms in school.  Arguments for uniforms1.      Uniforms will stop other…..
kisdobos 2009.06.03 16:22:13
Solutions to Task 2

1. This list is by no means exhaustive, but you get the idea. (you get the idea; too everyday sounding phrase for formal writing)

2. Yes, cliques can be a problem in schools. (Yes, …; You would say something like ‘It may be true that …, however …’)

3. Yes, judging people upon their apearance can be bad in schools. (Yes, …)

4. However, by making everyone wear the same types of clothes, I believe you are just sending the message that since you can't accept each other when you are different, we're going to make you all the same. (we ... you; we could be acceptable for some writers, though, as a way to suggest a connection between the reader and themselves.)

5. How will your child ever cope in the adult world when they actually do encounter someone who is different then themselves? (Rhetorical questions are used more in oral genres (e.g. a business presentation) where it’s important to build a rapport with the audience. )

6. When my mom bought my little brother his uniforms. … (Usually, such personal examples would be phrased in general terms to suggest they’re true for most people.)

7. Mind you, we aren't in the habit of buying new wardrobes every time a new school year starts, … (Mind you, …)

8. Some might say, "Wait a second. My kid's T-shirt costs $40 or more." (Direct quoting sounds informal; indirect quoting, that is paraphrasing, is the formal choice.)

9. If all the parents didn't buy their kids all logo clothing or taught their kids not to put emphasis on the logos, … (didn’t; no contraction in formal style)

10. I guess sometimes students from other schools … (Note that a lot of writers feel that the use of “I” makes their writing sound more informal and less respectable. Besides, “I guess” is an informal phrase for “in my view”)

11. stick out like a sore thumb (informal idiom)
 Task 2. Improve the language of the text with the phrases above each paragraph. In the 1950s Ruth Handler, "creator" of the Barbie doll, noticed that her daughter, Barbara, preferred to play with dolls that looked like adults rather than infants. At that time, most…..
kisdobos 2009.05.25 12:22:39
Solutions to Task 2.
The controversy surrounding the Barbie doll


In the 1950s Ruth Handler, "creator" of the Barbie doll, noticed that her daughter, Barbara, preferred to play with dolls that resembled adults rather than infants. At that time, most three-dimensional dolls were made to look like babies or small children, so realizing that there was a hole in the marketplace, Handler suggested the idea of a three-dimensional adult-bodied doll to her husband, Elliot Handler, a co-founder of the Mattel toy company, but the idea was scoffed at. Mattel's directors told her that it would be impossible to create such a doll. A few years later, in 1959, the doll was launched at the American International Toy Fair, and Barbie has been a best-selling doll ever since. However, her career is not without controversy. While lauded by her fans, her opponents argue that Barbie ‘should change’ if she wants to be a role model for little girls.

Racial inequality

In the Western world Barbie is often looked upon as an icon of childhood. Her effect on the play of Western children of course attracts a high degree of scrutiny. She is often criticized on grounds of promoting racial inequality. In many Barbie lines, there is an African-American character that is a version of another character, usually Barbie herself, when other variants ("friends") are given their own names. Some feel that this sends a message of racial inequality - whether it be one of superiority or inferiority. To counter the qualms of opponents, Barbies of different ethnic groups and nationalities have also been created, including African, Hispanic, Asian and Native American Barbies. These Barbies are no longer exact replicas of the original Barbie, as more than just skin, hair, and eye color are changed. Mattel has also developed numerous ethnically accurate head molds to embrace the diversity of their global consumers and to make up for the days back in the 1970's when "Black Barbie" was just the caucasian mold filled with dark plastic. Most commonly the Hispanic Teresa and African-American Christie appear as Barbie's "ethno-friend" alongside Skipper and occasionally red-head Midge, who has been around since the sixties.

Body image

Barbie has often been used to promote gender equality as an example that women can "be anything". She has taken up many occupations over the years. Here are some of them: teen-age fashion model, olympic athlete, paleontologist, doctor, dentist, veterinarian, astronaut, fashion designer, politician, rock star, McDonald's employee, etc. However, recently Barbie's presence in the life of an American girl has been said to be a negative influence. Many groups say that young girls may set the doll as their model, leading to issues with body image and gender role insecurities later in life. Barbie has drawn criticism from parents and anorexia nervosa groups for interfering with the development of a healthy body image. They argue that the images and messages of "beauty" she presents are unrealistic. Barbie has problematic measurements: she stands a "too perfect to be real" body shape. A lot of young girls may expect themselves to have the same figure as Barbie's and to push themselves to lose weight in order to be as thin as possible, ignorant of the fact that Barbie's proportions are unattainable; her neck is twice as long (in proportion) as the neck of a normal woman. Her feet are criticized as promoting the practice of foot binding - a normally developed foot will measure the length from the inner elbow to the wrist; however, Barbie's feet are only half this length. It is often quoted that "For a woman to have Barbie's body, she would have to be 7 feet, 2 inches in height; weigh 115-130 pounds; have 30 to 36 inch hips; an 18 to 23 inch waist; and a 38 to 48 inch bust. If she were a real person, Barbie would have to crawl around on all fours just to support her unnatural proportions, and she would not even have the 17 to 22 percent body fat that is required for a woman to menstruate." At least the company have tried to respond to criticisms when around the turn of the century, as Barbie's waist widened to more natural proportions.

Role model

The criticisms leveled at her are often based around the idea of children considering Barbie a role model and attempting to emulate her. The enormous range of available accessories relating to clothes, hair, make-up, parties and looking pretty gave rise to the accusation that Barbie encourages young girls to focus on shallow trivia. Her accessories reflect a lifestyle that is unobtainable for most of the girls who play with her. Although Barbie's lifestyle critics should also notice the fact that there are many career-related outfits, accessories, and themed play items that have been released over the years, including judge, doctor, executive, astronaut and firefighter. Still, "Barbie" is often used as a derogatory slang term for a person, particularly a girl or woman, who is considered stupid, as evidenced by the 1997 song "Barbie Girl". The controversy, however, reached its peak in 1992 when Mattel released "Teen Talk Barbie", a talking version of the doll. It spoke a number of phrases such as, "Will we ever have enough clothes?", "I love shopping!", and "Wanna have a pizza party?" Each doll was programmed to say four out of 270 possible phrases, so chances were good that no two dolls owned by a girl or her friends would be exactly the same. One of these 270 phrases was "Math class is tough!" Although only about 1.5% of all the dolls sold said the phrase, it caused public outcry.

---Adapted by Kisdobos from: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barbie
                           Task 1. Fill in the gaps with the missing phrases. a.       turned…..
kisdobos 2009.04.19 12:28:15
SOLUTIONS TO TASK 1.

(1) turned down
(2) barring parents from
(3) expose them to ridicule
(4) extravagant
(5) unusual monikers
(6) voter rolls
(7) by that name
(8) subsequently
(9) have a particular penchant for
(10) registry authorities
(11) up to the discretion of
(12) crack down on
(13) putting limits on people
(14) it is no one's business except
(15) common sense

Venezuela Seeks to Crack Down on Odd Baby Names
September 01, 2007

(CARACAS, Venezuela) Thinking of naming your baby Hersony, Nohemar — or even Superman? Such odd names might be (1) turned down by the civil registry if Venezuela approves a bill (2) barring parents from giving their children "names that (3) expose them to ridicule, are (4) extravagant or difficult to pronounce," or that raise doubts about whether a child is a girl or a boy.

If approved by the National Assembly, the bill could let authorities turn down names like some of the more (5) unusual monikers currently on the voter rolls: Edigaith, Mileidy, Leomar and Superman.

When opponents of President Hugo Chavez last year sought to question the accuracy of the (6) voter rolls, they noted that even "Superman" was listed. But electoral officials confirmed there are in fact two Venezuelans (7) by that name registered to vote, and one of them was (8) subsequently interviewed on state television.

While unusual names appear in many countries, Venezuelans seem to (9) have a particular penchant for going creative, whether through unusual spellings of English names like Maikel or Jhonny, or names of uncertain origin like Orlayny or Jesshy.

Current Venezuelan law already has a similar measure saying (10) registry authorities should not accept names that would expose children to ridicule. But the issue has until now been (11) left up to the discretion of individual bureaucrats.

The new bill proposes to create a list of traditional names that could be offered to parents "as a reference" to provide options when they are registering their child's birth. It says the list would have "no fewer than 100 names" and would grow over time.

Some Venezuelans think it makes sense to (12) crack down on odd baby names. "I agree with (13) putting limits on people who don't have a sense of the ridiculousness," said 58-year-old office worker Alfredo Blanco. But 27-year-old housewife Mariana Gonzalez said she thinks (14) it is no one's business except the parents how they choose to name a child. "Before all else should come (15) common sense."

Exercises created by Kisdobos using
www.foxnews.com/story/0,2933,295488,00.html


SOLUTIONS TO TASK 2

1. most common
2. whatsoever
3. afflicting other human beings with ridiculous names
4. open them up to ridicule
5. and, at worst, bullying
6. desperate to gain attention
7. socially handicapping their children
8. Funny the number of people who …
9. The first come up with the 'How's Liz' gag
10. I have been teased mercilessly
11. burst out laughing right in my face
12. the constant misspelling of Laslo
13. I have to repeat ad nauseum
14. in a futile effort to have it pronounced correctly
15. I was bullied, ridiculed
16. and mocked
17. mature adults still have a snicker at my expense
18. I approve wholeheartedly of the New Zealand law
19. Naming your child is not an exercise in creative writing
20. or an avenue for personal expression
21. ice-breaker
22. struggle to fill-in legal forms
23. the quirkiness of their name
24. can easily be turned into a joke
25. define this child in life

READER OPINIONS

“My name is Chris Morley. It's just about the (1) most common name in Britain and I've got no problem with it (2) whatsoever. In fact I like it. Who do these people think they are, afflicting other human beings (3) with ridiculous names that are almost certainly going to open them up to (4) ridicule and, at worst, (5) bullying? True parents, loving parents, try to give their offspring the best start in life. Instead these selfish idiots - who either find such names funny or who are so (6) desperate to gain attention that they are willing to use their children as a tool - are socially (7) handicapping their children from the very moment of birth.”
Chris Morley, Oxford, UK

“(8)Funny the number of people who when hearing my name for the first time still think they're the first to (9) come up with the 'How's Liz' gag! Been happening for best part of 50 years now!!”
Richard Burton, London

“I have been (10) teased mercilessly from childhood to my adult years. You won't believe the amount of times people have (11) burst out laughing right in my face when they ask my name.”
Craig Gogay, London, UK

“My name is relatively unusual but it has not caused me any problems in life - apart from the frustration caused by the (12) constant misspelling of Laslo. I have been called ‘Lasio’, ‘Lazlo’ and one time ‘Lazio’.”
Laslo Panaflex, Belgium

“Being called Slick has its advantages and disadvantages but I get along just fine, in fact I've learned to love my name.”
Slick Bryn Davies, Manchester

“My name has been a source of angst my entire life. To this day I have to (13) repeat ad nauseum; often times spelling my name, (14) in a futile effort to have it pronounced correctly. Sadly my middle name is no better and I was left with no choices in school. I was bullied, (15) ridiculed/made ridiculous and (16) mocked and to this day supposedly mature adults still (17) have a snicker at my expense. I approve (18) wholeheartedly of the New Zealand law that offers some recourse to children so benighted. Naming your child is (19) not an exercise in creative writing or an (20) avenue for personal expression; if you want that take a class or write a book. The psychological effects of an odd name are painful, deep and lasting.”
Kurleigh Martin, San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago

“My sister (Che) and I both have unusual names and we love them! It's nice to be unique in your school/college or place of work. It can also be an (21) ice-breaker when meeting new people. Lots of people comment favourably about my name and I've never been bullied as a consequence of it.”
Chula Bishop, Newbury England

“My name is Varithamby Jeyahprakash Tharamakulaseelarajan my brother's name is Sathiyasothilegaeswaran Thramakulaseelerajan, we still (22) struggle to fill-in legal forms because they never have enough space. Parents do not think long term when naming their children specially in South Asia. I think they should be given lessons in naming their offsprings.”
J Rajan, Colombo Sri Lanka

“No-one ever considered that the child might like the (23) quirkiness of their name. Nothing has ever held back my development or progress in the world. I'm now working in the catering trade and everyone calls me Eggy. I don't see the problem!”
Egnorwiddle Waldstrom , London, UK

“This is not to say there is anything wrong with being creative or unique when selecting that perfect name, but perhaps you can come to a compromise of something between the odd baby names and ordinary ones. Spend some time speaking some of the names you THINK you like. How do the names flow with your last name? Is the name something that can easily be (24) turned into a joke? That is not something you want for your very special baby. The most important thing to remember when choosing a name for your baby, is that it will (25) define this child in life. Be different and unique if you must. But always keep the future of your child in mind.”

                      Task 1. Read the statements concerning the advantages and disadvantages of technology. De-jumble the jumbled phrases. See solutions in Comments.  Do the…..
kisdobos 2009.03.22 18:33:46
SOLUTIONS

Do the advantages of technology outweigh the disadvantages?

“Technology can be defined as science applied to practical purposes. In developed and developing nations alike, technology has brought numerous material advantages in nearly every aspect of life.“

“Without doubt, in one way or another most people living today have benefited from the advancement of science and technology.“

“First and foremost, the use of machines, fertilizers, pesticides, and improved seeds has increased the food supply and nutrition for much of the world's population.“

“Advancements in medical science have resulted in better health and a longer life span for many.“

“The automobile and the airplane, along with developments in electronics, computers, and satellites, have made it possible for people to travel and to communicate with others around the world with relative ease.“

“Few people would be ready to give up the vast number of time- and labor-saving devices that they have come to take for granted and have grown accustomed to in their daily lives.“

“Although the massive infusion of technology into society during the past few decades has brought immense benefits, there is mounting evidence that some technological developments may aggravate, rather than solve, many pressing social and environmental problems.“

“This nation leads the world in wealth and power, but also leads in the degradation of the human habitat. We have the most automobiles and the worst junkyards. We are the most mobile people on earth and we endure the worst congestion. We produce the most energy and have the foulest air.“

“It is argued that the material benefits created by technology outweigh the loss of clean air, water, and land.“

“Another defense for technology is that sooner or later it will come up with the solutions to take care of the problems. The truth of the matter is that the technological know-how already exists to stop or even reverse much of the damage done. But to do the job will cost money, and cost a great deal. For example, just to clean up the 786 toxic-waste dump sites designated by the U.S. government as hazardous would require setting up a fund of $7.5 billion to $10 billion—a sum no one is quite prepared to pay.“

“The fear has always been that new machines would put people out of work. Early in the Industrial Revolution, textile workers in Nottingham, England, felt so threatened that, led by a Ned Ludd, they destroyed hundreds of the newly introduced machines in the notorious Luddite riots of 1811-12.“

“The success of the Industrial Revolution makes all such actions seem ludicrous today. Yet, the introduction of computerized automation and robots in offices and factories is rekindling such fears. Some, however, dismiss such fears by pointing out that computer technology generates its own jobs—high-tech jobs such as computer operators, designers, programmers, and so on—that will absorb the displaced workers after retraining.“

“Most people envision a degree of sophistication with high-tech jobs. But one labor expert observed that while some such jobs are "spirit-enlarging and mind-challenging," most are "incredibly mind-stunting, mind-dulling." Rather than doing away with drudgery, most jobs in the high-tech industry are repetitive, highly supervised, and require little technical skill.”

“For the sake of efficiency the jobs become increasingly monitored and specialized—meaning that workers do smaller and smaller fractions of the larger task. People are used as extensions of machines. This is dehumanizing. What results is a feeling of alienation, or lack of a sense of purpose and accomplishment.”

“In many areas, technology has become so pervasive in people's daily life—appliances, transportation, entertainment, and so on—that many probably would find it difficult to survive in a less technologically developed society.“

“Mankind is facing the threat of total destruction facing mankind today. There is no denying that much of this has been brought about by the technological development that has produced the fearsome weapons of war—from the crossbow to the laser space-weapon. The height of such development, no doubt, was that in just three years, from June 1942 to July 1945, scientists and technicians were able to develop the first atom bomb.

“Increased control over nature is not providing safety and peace of mind; economic prosperity is not making people healthier or happier; technological innovations create problems of their own, which continually necessitate the development of new counter-technologies.”

www.oppapers.com/essays/Technologyhow-Affects-Us/116723
Task 1. Write a 350-word essay  on the benefits and flipsides of technology, and technological progress. When you sit down to write, try to make a quick list of different inventions and technological processes, and then categorize them. This will help you broaden your focus, so you won’t…..
                              Task 1. Fill in the gaps with the missing phrases. a.       turned…..
kisdobos 2009.03.11 15:04:47
SOLUTIONS

Task 1. Venezuela cracks down on baby names

1. most common
2. whatsoever
3. afflicting other human beings with ridiculous names
4. open them up to ridicule
5. and, at worst, bullying
6. desperate to gain attention
7. socially handicapping their children
8. Funny the number of people who …
9. The first come up with the 'How's Liz' gag
10. I have been teased mercilessly
11. burst out laughing right in my face
12. the constant misspelling of Laslo
13. I have to repeat ad nauseum
14. in a futile effort to have it pronounced correctly
15. I was bullied, ridiculed
16. and mocked
17. mature adults still have a snicker at my expense
18. I approve wholeheartedly of the New Zealand law
19. Naming your child is not an exercise in creative writing
20. or an avenue for personal expression
21. ice-breaker
22. struggle to fill-in legal forms
23. the quirkiness of their name
24. can easily be turned into a joke
25. define this child in life


Task 2.
READER OPINIONS

“My name is Chris Morley. It's just about the (1) most common name in Britain and I've got no problem with it (2) whatsoever. In fact I like it. Who do these people think they are, afflicting other human beings (3) with ridiculous names that are almost certainly going to open them up to (4) ridicule and, at worst, (5) bullying? True parents, loving parents, try to give their offspring the best start in life. Instead these selfish idiots - who either find such names funny or who are so (6) desperate to gain attention that they are willing to use their children as a tool - are socially (7) handicapping their children from the very moment of birth.”
Chris Morley, Oxford, UK

“(8)Funny the number of people who when hearing my name for the first time still think they're the first to (9) come up with the 'How's Liz' gag! Been happening for best part of 50 years now!!”
Richard Burton, London

“I have been (10) teased mercilessly from childhood to my adult years. You won't believe the amount of times people have (11) burst out laughing right in my face when they ask my name.”
Craig Gogay, London, UK

“My name is relatively unusual but it has not caused me any problems in life - apart from the frustration caused by the (12) constant misspelling of Laslo. I have been called ‘Lasio’, ‘Lazlo’ and one time ‘Lazio’.”
Laslo Panaflex, Belgium

“Being called Slick has its advantages and disadvantages but I get along just fine, in fact I've learned to love my name.”
Slick Bryn Davies, Manchester

“My name has been a source of angst my entire life. To this day I have to (13) repeat ad nauseum; often times spelling my name, (14) in a futile effort to have it pronounced correctly. Sadly my middle name is no better and I was left with no choices in school. I was bullied, (15) ridiculed/made ridiculous and (16) mocked and to this day supposedly mature adults still (17) have a snicker at my expense. I approve (18) wholeheartedly of the New Zealand law that offers some recourse to children so benighted. Naming your child is (19) not an exercise in creative writing or an (20) avenue for personal expression; if you want that take a class or write a book. The psychological effects of an odd name are painful, deep and lasting.”
Kurleigh Martin, San Fernando, Trinidad and Tobago

“My sister (Che) and I both have unusual names and we love them! It's nice to be unique in your school/college or place of work. It can also be an (21) ice-breaker when meeting new people. Lots of people comment favourably about my name and I've never been bullied as a consequence of it.”
Chula Bishop, Newbury England

“My name is Varithamby Jeyahprakash Tharamakulaseelarajan my brother's name is Sathiyasothilegaeswaran Thramakulaseelerajan, we still (22) struggle to fill-in legal forms because they never have enough space. Parents do not think long term when naming their children specially in South Asia. I think they should be given lessons in naming their offsprings.”
J Rajan, Colombo Sri Lanka

“No-one ever considered that the child might like the (23) quirkiness of their name. Nothing has ever held back my development or progress in the world. I'm now working in the catering trade and everyone calls me Eggy. I don't see the problem!”
Egnorwiddle Waldstrom , London, UK

“This is not to say there is anything wrong with being creative or unique when selecting that perfect name, but perhaps you can come to a compromise of something between the odd baby names and ordinary ones. Spend some time speaking some of the names you THINK you like. How do the names flow with your last name? Is the name something that can easily be (24) turned into a joke? That is not something you want for your very special baby. The most important thing to remember when choosing a name for your baby, is that it will (25) define this child in life. Be different and unique if you must. But always keep the future of your child in mind.”
                    Task 1. Comment on this newsclip in a few sentences. This Is My Son Superman Thursday, August 09, 2007   A New Zealand baby may go through life with the name…..
Task 1. Write an essay exploring both the drawback and benefits of odd baby names. 1.       As for ideas, you may borrow from your readings, but you can only use your memory to recall the arguments, and you may not look into the blog. So read these arguments once, and…..
                 Task 1. Find synonyms in the text for: 1.       a big problem for society2.       a search for excitement…..
kisdobos 2009.03.09 16:34:01
Solutions

1. have a desire for - crave sg
2. people dependant on adrenalie - adrenaline junkies
3. need v. – be in need of sg
4. help v. - come to their aid
5. cause - trigger
6. on the surface - seemingly
7. restrict v. – curb v.
8. people who do reckless things - daredevils
9. a search for excitement - sensation seeking
10. risk v. - runs the risk of
11. driving too dangerously - reckless driving
12. take part in actions with negative consequences - destructive behaviours
13. avoid v. - stave off v.
14. destroy v. – devastate v.
15. involving little exercise or physical activity - sedentary existence
16. change v. - turn around
17. increasing - be on the rise
18. self-control - self discipline
19. provoking, calling for - inviting even greater risk
20. a big problem for society - a heavy burden for society to bear


Living on the Edge: Extreme Sports should not be restricted
Model argumentative essay

We all crave adventure to some degree or another, but there are some people who need above average excitement and take it one step further, participating in high-risk activities- sports played on the edge, where the consequences are far greater, and where as the great American mountaineer and outdoor philosopher Willi Unsoeld once said, ‘It has to be real enough to kill you.’ With regard to extreme sports, the perception of the general public is that people who choose to take risks are irresponsible ‘adrenaline junkies’ who are ultimately a burden to society. When a person takes unnecessary risks, and becomes injured or in need of rescue, the expenses for coming to their aid are often borne by taxpayers. A backcountry rescue after skiers trigger an avalanche, for example, will cost thousands of dollars. Some voices in the public, therefore, call for a restriction of such sports to avoid having to pay for these seemingly foolish actions. However, participation in extreme sports should not be restricted, because by curbing a person’s passions and access to their chosen sports these athletes will find outlets for their energy in the form of addictions, reckless driving or gambling that is much more burdensome and costly to society.

RISK-TAKING BEHAVIORS SHOULD BE ENCOURAGED SINCE THE CURRENT TRENDS TO MINIMIZE RISKS AND RISK TAKING ARE GOING TO SUFFOCATE THE ENTREPRENEURIAL SPIRIT IN SOCIETY. Psychologists studying thrill seeking risk-takers for decades, and has developed the term “Type T” (T standing for thrill seeking). Type T’s are not just the mountain climbing daredevils of the world, however. They are often our best inventors, entrepreneurs and explorers. They are CEOs, surgeons, and civil rights leaders.History's most crucial events are shaped by Type T individuals exhibiting Type T behaviour, from Boris Yeltsin to Martin Luther King, Jr. We wouldn’t be the progressive, vibrant society we are today if no one was willing to take risks. The act of emigration, he says, is an intrinsically risky endeavor that selects individuals who are high in sensation seeking. Consequently, countries built upon immigrant population--America, Canada, Australia--probably have an above-average level of risk takers. He warns that much of the current effort to minimize risk and risk taking itself runs the risk of eliminating "a large part of what made these countries great in the first place.

WITHOUT RELATIVELY SAFE OUTLETS FOR THIS DRIVE, PEOPLE PREDISPOSED TO RISK TAKING BEHAVIORS WILL SEEK OUT MORE UNDESIRABLE ACTIVITIES, WITH POTENTIALLY GREATER PERSONAL, SOCIAL, AND ECONOMIC CONSEQUENCES. In fact, Type T personalities might satisfy their craving for stimulation through abusing sex, drugs and alcohol, gambling, reckless driving or engaging in other destructive behaviours. If we deprive them of extreme sports they might become someone who will stop by the casino on their way home from work in search of excitement. Or they might find themselves gambling beyond his means in an attempt to stave off boredom.’ Gambling addiction is a serious problem that can quickly devastate individuals, destroy marriages, break up families and lead to other addictions and health problems. Many people never recover and become a long term drain on the public purse as they require rehabilitation, welfare, and often expensive, ongoing medical care.

PRACTICING ANY SPORTS, TRADITIONAL OR EXTREME, KEEPS THE YOUTH HEALTHY. Consider the kids in the skateboard park. Without the park at the local community center where they can practice and refine their skills, they might follow the lead of many of their peers, opting for a more sedentary existence playing video games which has proven links to obesity and contributed a fivefold increase in childhood obesity over the past 20 years. Opportunities for physical activity for children are critical to turning that trend around, and avoiding heart disease and other health problems down the road. In a day and age where heart disease and type 2 Diabetes are on the rise, we really shouldn’t be discouraging anyone from pursuing physical activities. The long-term costs associated with treating the inevitable outcome of obesity and heart disease are far greater than the cost of setting a few broken arms and repainting a few railings.

INSTEAD OF SHUNNING AND DISCOURAGING EXTREME ATHLETES, WE SHOULD CELEBRATE THEM FOR CLIMBING HIGHER, GOING FASTER AND PUSHING THE LIMITS OF HUMAN ENDURANCE. As T.S. Elliot once said, “Only those who will risk going too far can possibly find out how far one can go.” With public support, extreme athletes can expand our boundaries, and strengthen the spirit that is manifested in the entrepreneurial endeavors of mankind.

All in all, people who are predisposed to take risks are fulfilling their needs in extreme sports in legitimate ways, since the high they are seeking is achieved through self discipline, hard work, and a healthy lifestyle. While there are some risks involved in extreme sports, by curbing their passions and limiting access to activities some consider too dangerous, we may be inviting even greater risk in the form of addictions, crime and health problems the end result of which is a heavy burden for society to bear.

Source text adapted to the argumentative ssay format by Kisdobos:
www.summitpost.org/article/214107/living-on-the-edge-extreme-sports-and-their-role-in-society.html
                Task 1. Insert the phrases.1.      amazing stunts2.      a new trend emerged3.      boast a more youthful…..
kisdobos 2009.03.07 17:04:33
Task 1. Solutions

1. spectacular stunts
2. an umbrella term
3. attracts a following
4. to push the limits
5. to showcase new tricks
6. adrenaline junkies
7. obsession with
8. become a way of life
9. causing concern amongst
10. in the pursuit of thrills
11. lives have been lost


Going to Extremes
by Brian Boyd, British Council


INTRO
Speed, height, spectacular stunts, or a combination of all three – extreme sports, an umbrella term that includes skateboarding, BMX freestyle, surfing and snowboarding, attracts a following – mainly of young adults – keen to push the limits of their own courage and physical ability. The wide variety of activities in this category makes it difficult to define, but it is certainly one of sport’s biggest growth areas.

HISTORY
Extreme sports received a huge popularity boost in the mid-nineties, when American sports channel ESPN launched the ‘X Games’. Broken into two seasons – the Winter X Games and Summer X Games – these huge annual events bring together the best of the world’s extreme athletes to compete for gold, silver and bronze medals. The games are high profile, and the superstars of extreme sports often use the contests to showcase new tricks and attempt records.

DRIVE
Some enthusiasts describe themselves as ‘adrenaline junkies’, and for them the obsession with reaching new extremes has become a way of life, complete with clothing fashions and music. In fact, the X Games tournament has developed a festival-like atmosphere with bands performing live at the venues.

CONTROVERSY
Rebellious culture and controversy continue to surround extreme sports, causing concern amongst some local authorities and parent groups. Many people argue that taking such risks in the pursuit of thrills is foolhardy. While it is true that lives have been lost, serious participants use their skills and experience to control the risks they take – and it is that control which makes their activities sports and not just dangerous behaviour.


Exercise created by Kisdobos. Source text:
www.britishcouncil.org/learnenglish-central-magazine-extreme-sports.htm


Task 2. Solutions

1. a new trend emerged
2. had an element of danger
3. hallmarks
4. boast a more youthful demographic
5. push the bounds
6. physical exertion
7. amazing stunts
8. defy the laws of gravity
9. more solitary pursuits


What is an extreme sport?

In the 1990’s a new trend emerged in sports. Although there was no name for them at the time, they soon became known collectively as “extreme sports” or “action sports”. While there was a general acceptance that extreme sports were those that had an element of danger that didn’t exist in traditional sports, there was never a solid way to classify extreme sports as such. Nevertheless, other hallmarks of extreme sports seems to be age, intensity and individualism.

Typically, extreme sports boast a more youthful demographic than others. Enthusiasts of extreme sports typically fall within the categories of Gen-X and Generation Y. That includes those in their teens through those into their 30's.

Intensity is another way to identify an extreme sport. While most sports have the capacity for intensity, extreme sports push the bounds with regards to speed, danger, physical exertion and amazing stunts. Extreme sports athletes have mastered the physical and mental skills needed to travel within the most inhospitable environments and even to defy the laws of gravity.

And finally, extreme sports are typically more solitary pursuits than traditional sports.

Exercise created by Kisdobos. Source text:
extremesports.suite101.com/article.cfm/extreme_sport_vs_recreation
Az ugandai út nemcsak bodabodázásból meg vadasparkozásból állt, hanem elmentem a Nakivale menekülttáborba is, ahová augusztus óta kb. tízezer kongói menekült érkezett a már jelenlévő harmincezer ember mellé. A teljes beszámoló itt olvasható. Mbararából indultam egy shared…..
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 Task 1. Use the chunks below to assemble a quote by the famous management guru, Peter Drucker. are at any other time, business decisions given lunch and dinner more occur on the subjectover than yet no MBA courses Task 2. Every two sentences make up one statement. Find the pairs. Check…..
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Solutions to Task 1.

"More business decisions occur over lunch and dinner than at any other time, yet no MBA courses are given on the subject."
----Peter Drucker


Solutions to Task 2.

1. 80% of the jobs available never get advertised. According to CareerXRoad's 2007 Annual Sources of Hire Survey, 34% of new hires brought in from outside an organization were due to employee referrals.
2. The great myth of networking is that you start reaching out to others only when you need something -- like a job. Many people start networking only after they've lost their jobs. Effective networking means creating contacts and relationships while you're still employed.
3. Networking isn't a process of making cold-calls to people you don't know. It's talking to people you do know or asking them to introduce you to others.
4. Networking is always a two-way street. It must benefit both persons to be most effective, so as you ask your network for help when you need, be prepared to return the favor when asked.
5. No one likes to be used. Follow up every conversation with a thank-you note, email or call. Let your contact know whether his suggestions panned out or not. When your job search ends -- for whatever reason -- inform the person who has helped you. You may think your networking is over, but your paths may cross again.


Solutions to Task 3.

We bet you haven’t heard of the business version
Dozens of people
Exchange business cards
In or outside of their industries
We’re joined today by
We’re all sort of familiar with speeddating
It’s a matter of meeting the most people you can
within a very short period of time
Honing your skills in terms of
Your elevator speech
You have rows of people facing each other
After a five minute span
Roughly two and a half minutes
Inside corporations
In a short amount of time
You have to be a good judge of character
A tremendous amount of business
Over the last couple years
We appreciate you being with us
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